Getting Chased | Show-Not-Tell (SNT) | Tuesday 20th June 2017 | [ Part 1 ]
The sound of the howling wind travelled like a airplane,
as a unfairly-treated man leans against the splintery wall of a rusting shelter.
His heavy breathing accelerating every minute.
The voices echoed inside his head, while painful thoughts sailed across his mind.
A loud angry yell breaks through the howling wind, they were coming.
After some brief seconds of listening, thoughts of seeing them again made the man spill with emotions, but the yelling outside made him build up with fear.
With the voices, yelling, flashback memories and the howling wind made him feel like he was gonna crumble.
It felt like an ocean of emotions where you are getting dragged down by the mixing waves of emotion and whenever you finally reach the surface of satisfaction you get crashed back down by another wave of emotions, going and going like an endless cycle.
He was doomed. ✏
WOW! Annabelle, that was an amazing story and great words, whoops, by the way my name is Parwin and I am from Yaldhurst Model School. Your story is amazing and even though it was pretty short, it was still finger licking good! I wonder if I can write a story as great as yours, please write more of this! :D If you want to see my blog then here it is...
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