A BLANK Canvas
For Writing we were given a task to create an image to fill in a Blank Canvas, then write two paragraphs with Complex+Compound Sentences, my image is inspired by two puppets.
The two figures stood motionless, motionless because they were digitally drawn to be still to inspire or extend the imagination of young or old minds, the canvas was always stationed there. Freeze framed.
One day two women approached the image, curious to how fictional it looked; a pink unicorn laughing with a blue croc/Lizard. The Pink unicorn stood on all-fours while the Lizard/Croc stood on it’s hind legs, both were different species; a mammal (the unicorn) and a reptile (the lizard/croc), both unalike. It was unclear to what the two were laughing about but it was clear that they were both happy, both enjoying each others company.
The two were both completely different, the unicorn held pink-related colours with some tint of dark purples while the Lizard/croc had four different main colours, the colours were blue, orange, black and an type of green. The Fictional figures still stood still alone, quiet, frozen until…something *sparkled*.
Hi Annabelle, you have done a create job on this writing. The picture shows that you clearly put heaps of effort into it. Your text below is really descriptive . Well done basing this on the puppets.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rheanna for that lovely comment! This comment diffidently makes me feel better and more confident about my work, any questions? ♥
Deletewow this is so cool
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Marshall and I am from Parkview School. I liked how you explained what your writing was about at the beginning and used the correct punctuation. It made it easier for me to know what your writing was about and why you did it. What do you like about your work and what would you change to make it better?
Amazing Annabelle! Maybe you could finish it? I would love to read more!
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