Hey that's pretty good! This slide was really good, you described favorite things really well! But there was one sentence that needs improving... the hardest subject I struggling in is, maths, But other than that this slide was top notch! That's Pretty Good!
Hey Annabelle, Good job I really enjoyed your slide maybe next time you could add in somethings you like instead of having don't have one. But still great work and good job.
Hi Annabelle, i love the app it was grate and wore work was out of this world i loved it and you have grate talented i wish you would shear them with me
Hey Annabelle this is a good all about me I didn't know much about you but now I do so it makes me happy to get to know you more I learnt you like to play soccer/football I like to play soccer maybe we should have a game sometime
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Hey that's pretty good!
ReplyDeleteThis slide was really good, you described favorite things really well!
But there was one sentence that needs improving... the hardest subject I struggling in is, maths,
But other than that this slide was top notch!
That's Pretty Good!
Hey Annabelle,
ReplyDeleteGood job I really enjoyed your slide maybe next time you could add in somethings you like instead of having don't have one. But still great work and good job.
Hi Annabelle,
ReplyDeletei love the app it was grate and wore work was out of this world i loved it and you have grate talented i wish you would shear them with me
Hey Annabelle this is a good all about me I didn't know much about you but now I do so it makes me happy to get to know you more I learnt you like to play soccer/football I like to play soccer maybe we should have a game sometime
ReplyDeleteHi Annabelle,
ReplyDeleteI love how you have added an extra link to a site. Next time you could space slide 11 out a bit more. Thanks